Here's how I read it.

First glance: It has several common errors. I see nothing glaringly wrong. I also see no obvious "hire me" points.

It probably would fail the first pass through the pile because there will be better looking applicants.



Now looking closer...

Your headings are HUGE. I understand when you are starting out that you don't have a lot, but there are elements you can add beyond large font sizes. Shrink them.

Education is your biggest point. Seems correct, since you probably only have two years. This instantly makes me question if you are ready for entry level. Perhaps an intern position would be better. Can you actually work full time?

I know what "Computer Science" is, but a major of "Computer Graphics Technology" makes me think you are not quite right for a general programming job. Instead of listing your courses, list what you did about them that made them notable. "Advanced C Programming" could mean that you simply read about the C standard library. I don't know how "Electric & Magnetic Interactions" relates to game development. Tell me things you did and how they relate to your ability to make games or your ability to work with a development team.


Eagle Scout. Good achievement, but when applying for a game programming job it probably takes second place to the Game Developers United. I have no idea what Phi Sigma Kappa is, neither Wikipedia nor Google provide much useful information. I assume those are positions you held, but you don't say what you did or how it relates to game development. It looks like you were given four jobs last year, which implies to me that it is a small group that doesn't actually do much. I have no idea what a Taekwondo club has to do with game development, other than that you have a hobby.

Technical skills section is useless to employers, except as a way to exclude you. Show me what you did with each of those things, and then I'll decide how experienced and skilled you are. Listing Windows and Linux it not useful for a programmer. If you are able to program and attended college you are expected to understand both of them.

Do you have any work experience that relates to game development? If any of your jobs had transferable skills, add them.

Cut the "references available upon request". We know that. It is filler. CUT.

That leaves some extra space. Have you done any hobby games, or hobby game development work, or even fun little demos or projects? Add them, and add the web page where they are available.